Thanks to Todd Garland and Carol Warren for sending some four-line haiku. This is cool. If Jack Kerouac and others paved the way to a relaxation of the three-line 5/7/5 pattern, why not have four-line haiku?
To each his or her own sartori, I say. There can be, some say, one-word poems, horizontal and vertical poems, pinwheel poems and on and on. American haiku is supposed to break some rules, isn’t it? West Virginia haiku — why not? — can break even more rules. These are the first four-line haiku I’ve noticed, not that it hasn’t been tried somewhere. Then again, these may be haiku with titles.
Here’s the e-mail and nine four-liners, predictably light-hearted:
Dear Vic,
It seems that I recently saw in the Charleston Gazette a call for locally derived haiku which had as its subject or protagonist the feline domesticus. Tonight I jotted down a few and soon found my lovely bride peering over my shoulder eager to add her own.
So it goes.
Here are our few attempts. Don’t even begin to sort out which did what.
Trust me.
Todd Garland
Carol Warren
P.S. But do please write back if you find any of them interesting.
Beginner’s Mind
A mouse. Concentrate.
Breathe in. My eyes have not moved.
For thirty seconds.
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